dpchallenge pic

I was out shooting my daughter and neice for the practice. Well, the entire pic had both the girls chins resting on a peice of flat stone(we covered it with blue material)looking at each other. In the background is this long stove that says "Chambers of Commerce". I knew I wanted to do something with this pic but didn't know what. I played with it for a while and that is when I remembered dpchallenge's challenge this week. "Centered Composition" and this is what I entered: let me know what you think, ALL comments welcomed!